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Comic 17 - Page 16
15th Jun 2014, 6:24 PM
Page 16
Average Rating: 4.93 (15 votes) Rate this comic
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Clanjack Farlo edit delete reply
Clanjack Farlo
Great job establishing these characters. I feel like I have a solid understanding of the kind of people they are, after only two pages of them altogether.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thanks Clanjack! I often struggle with trying to create realistic dialog. This time I found that between these characters, their dialog wrote itself. I enjoyed creating the banter.
Stever edit delete reply
The bottom middle is panel has great impact.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thank you Stever. It's encouraging to know that I'm getting the effect I wanted to create in that panel.
Spitfire edit delete reply
I agree with Stever, well done o.o
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thanks Spitfire.
IllustratorMan edit delete reply
That middle panel is so intimidating. Effective shading.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thanks. I had made a huge mistake with that panel. I started crosshatching like a madman until I started liking it again. As far as the lighting goes, I can honestly say that I have been studying yours and others comics and been trying to improve my colouring.
Outlaw edit delete reply
Wow... This page is masterfully done. Bravo!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Outlawkion1, thank you. I actually put thought into how I placed the mysterious dark character centered in the page as you scroll down the page.
Skyangel edit delete reply
I think maybe he should be a little more careful how he talks to the 'guy' in the back who looks incredibly sinister! Really loved reading through the archive and I'm looking forward to keeping up with it now.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thank you Skyangel! You've made my day. One of the great features of this forum is finding feedback on a comic page I've made. I will often check and recheck my pages in hopes of finding new comments. Imagine my delight in finding all of your thoughtful comments on my statistics page. I appreciate the time you took to make observations as you did. Thank you again.
radio_mustard_james edit delete reply
Great job establishing these guys! I feel like I'm watching a Cohen brothers movie....and it helps the guy with the pink "B" on his cap looks like Bobby weir from the grateful dead
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thanks. I'm a fan of the Cohen brothers' films, so it doesn't surprise me that my love of the moods and tones that they set in their movies has influenced my leanings in story-telling.
dougwarner59 edit delete reply
I really like your art style this was a fun comic to read. subscribed
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it progresses.
Jams edit delete reply
I agree with IM, panel 4 is tops.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thankyou. It was the one I was most pleased with in the end.
Slim Kittens edit delete reply
Slim Kittens
This page does have a distinct "Fargo" vibe to it.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Thanks Slim Kittens. I love the movie 'Fargo', so that is kind what I was going for.
Sleeper edit delete reply
That turkey changed his tune quick!
Skweeee edit delete reply
As he should, would agree.
iggycrypt edit delete reply
Oh, yes it is. And, they had better be a lot more careful around him. He's serious trouble.
Adina edit delete reply
Woah. The shading in this whole page is fantastic. I actually love the way you hatch everything. It really flows.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Ah! Thank you. If only I had the time. I had to abandon this style because it was so time consuming. If I do a comic that is strictly black and white in the future I would like to revisit the crosshatching again.
corntown edit delete reply
Love the face on the man in the third panel.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Ah thanks man. I was trying my hand with crosshatching on this page! It was a lot a work and gobbled too much time in the end so I started to abandon this technique.