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Comic 60 - Page 59
21st Feb 2015, 11:15 PM
Page 59
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Skweeee edit delete
Skweeee
Hi!!
I went back and tweaked page 58 as much as I dared by increasing the font a little.

Here's a little more exposition for you.

Plus.... Centcomm did up a great fan art of Piper. It's such a thrill to see one of my characters done up 3D style. thank you centcomm. You can find it in the fan art forum or in the 'Piper's extra Things' tab at the top of the page in a few days when I re-teach myself how to properly put up Fan arts!!
http://comicfury.com/profile.php?username=Centcomm
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User comments:
Sleeper edit delete reply
Sleeper
She's like, "Oh, don't mind me. I'm just sitting here quietly listening to your history lesson."
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi XibalbanSleeper!
Ha ha ha! You've got that right! I think she just got sucked in to all this drama whether she likes it or not.
ProfEtheric edit delete reply
ProfEtheric
"By the way, who's this?" Classic!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Prof!!

Yep, looks like someone just got recruited in to this little mess. Unfortunately for her...
Amalockh1 edit delete reply
Amalockh1
I loved the expression of the girl in the last panel XD
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hello Amalockh1!!

Thanks, I'm glad you like 'Robin's' expression!!!
Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
Blush ! Glad you liked the CG art :D I enjoyed doing it as I rarely work with kids - Piper is adorable :D ( thank you for the font increase its MUCH easier on the eyes now. )

Love Robins expression Err ill just,... be .. going * POOF * LOL !

Excellent page !

Oh easy way to throw links in authors comments

[++url=LINK HERE NO SPACES]words words words[++/url]

Remove the ++

Makes this comic fury fourm thread
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Centcomm!!!

Thank you!!! Robin's part in this chunk of the story, is what I was looking forward to doing. I wanted to return the focus in the story back to the 'now', but do so in one panel.

Holy Toledo, Centcomm!!!!! Not only have you given me a beautiful fan art, but you've also given me an amazing gift of knowledge of how to put link into my comments!! I'm going to have so much fun playing with it!!!!!!!

MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!!
jolle edit delete reply
jolle
So... much... exposition.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Too much????
HeSerpenty edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
Oohhh wow that's a LOT to take in!! I'd say her life just got a whooooooooooole lot more complicated XD
It won't ever be the same again! :O
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hello HeSerpenty!!!!!

You've got that so right. I think she's got that (I'm on a runaway train headed for a blown up bridge) feeling!!! D:
CiciEnixa edit delete reply
CiciEnixa
You know, Lili, that is a question you should've asked BEFORE going on about Ee'awa being evil. That little girl could just as easily have been a spy. Thank goodness she's just a really nervous and confused girl XD
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi there, Cici!!

Ha ha, poor Robin! You know, it begs the question; is Lili super absent minded, or is she a sly manipulator who knows exactly what she's doing??
Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
im going with sly.. :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hmmmm..? Centcomm, are you peeking into my brain!!! D:
Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
maayyyyyybe :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee


brain shield
Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
dang it !!! Foiled again ! :D
dougwarner59 edit delete reply
dougwarner59
that was a dramatic change in pipers life.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Doug!

Yes, Piper's Song, is going to be rapidly changing gears for the next while.
Stever edit delete reply
Stever
I'm sure Piper's thinking, I don't really feel like doing a bunch of work for a Gizmo XD
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi, Stever,

Yeah, I suspect that Lili is going to be a demanding instructor...
Seabiscuit edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Hahaha! "By the way, who's this?" Glorious. Not a lot of awareness there, eh.;D
I love the look on Robins face. She's involved and apart of it now! Hopefully Piper can keep her safe.

Poor Piper. She really doesn't have much choice at all! I can't wait to see the training.:D
Also loved how Lili sort of pops in the history here ;D

Lovely fanart!!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Seabiscuit!!!!

Thank you! I'm happy that that last panel is being well received.

Yeah, Piper's future is pretty much set in stone. She's smart enough to know she should just go with it.
Miaubol edit delete reply
Miaubol
-"That seat is yours."
-"But.. but... I'm still a kid..."

O.O
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey there, Miaubol!

One has to wonder if the Mahawd Ah'hra even recognize Canadian child labour laws. How barbaric.
demcleod edit delete reply
demcleod
Such a cool world you've built Skweeee. I'm wondering how Bebber's going to fit into all this. :-D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hello Dwayne!
I'm glad your enjoying this made-up world!!! I wonder if Bebber is even 'able' to fit into any of this at all???
Matt Knab edit delete reply
Matt Knab
We start tomorrow? I hope nothing happens tonight!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Matt!
Hmmmmm, Lili must think that they have some leeway here?
sephirencomics edit delete reply
sephirencomics
Yay update! Awesome page as always :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Sephirencomics!

Thank you very much!
Ninabird edit delete reply
Ninabird
I'm really curious to see what this training looks like. :)
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hello Ninabird!

Oh I think we'll see some of that training coming up.
DizzasterJuice edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
Piper, take the seat, because I'm not too keen on the slave thing.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Dizz!

Yeah, this Ee'Awa guy sounds like a big douche.
Slim Kittens edit delete reply
Slim Kittens
"Who, me? I'm nobody. And I was just leaving..."
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
I see nothing
Clanjack Farlo edit delete reply
Clanjack Farlo
Hmm... Piper's taking this rather calmly!

Yeah, I'd prefer not to be enslaved by that guy, no matter how fabulous his beard is. I'm hoping for Piper to try for that seat. ;)

Love the last panel, by the way! That's just classic! XD
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Clanjack!

Fortunately Piper is a stand-up-gal, so we can pretty much count on her to protect everyone. Ah! I'm glad the last panel worked out.
moizmad edit delete reply
moizmad
Geeez, it took me 2 hours just to get to the bottom here....all those unpronounceable names almost as bad as Crease! That old dude looks like the ghost of Jerry Garcia!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hellooooooo, Mo!!!!
You are comparing me to Dizz's THE CREASE? Why thank you!

shinka edit delete reply
shinka
hmmmm what's next, what's next ???

nice jam packed page... Lots in it :)
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey shinka!

Fortunately, I have some more of that "what's next" with Piper's name on it.
randomNPC edit delete reply
randomNPC
Shes going to teach Piper on how to kick Ee'Awa's um... behind! ;p
Awesome page!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hello RandomNPC!

Whatever it is Lili is going to teach, let's hope it's practical.

Thank you!
Miss-Kennedy edit delete reply
Miss-Kennedy
Great and thrilling End oif part 2. Again, what cool facial expression. There's so much life in thois work.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Allo Miss Kennedy!

Thank you very much!
Spelledeg edit delete reply
Spelledeg
Man, Piper's life has gone from 'I sleepwalk sometimes' to 'Oh yes the blue man and so much more is real..OH AND Ee'Awa is gonna wanna kill you. You can now call me boss-Lili.'

I recently read through PS again to see if I missed anything. I think we're gonna be seeing some of that flute soon, if I'm right on my hunch.

Beautiful page, Skweeee. Lili has some of her work cut out for her, but I don't expect Piper to have much difficulty..maybe. I know there's other twists over the horizon. :)
...I really wonder how Robin's gonna do since she's unintentionally been roped into this.
I love your expressions on this page so much!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Spelledeg!!!!!

Ha ha, yeah, I tried my best to make this exposition as 'concentrated' as I could. I can't how many times I distilled this part of the story. My original draft was Lili talking for 7 pages!! I eventually got it down to just under two pages with a lot of error and trial.

The flute is coming. However, there are still some story things that need to be in place before that happens. (It will be a perfect moment-I hope)

Thanks Spelledeg! Let's hope that Piper is a fast learner. Soon everything will be closing in on her and her friends. Robin's 'big sister' title is going to be put to the test. That's all I'm going to say.

I'm glad you like the facial expressions. That is definitely something I've been trying to improve. The next thing will be trying to be more consistent with character rendering.

Thanks for the kind words Spelledeg. Your encouragement means a lot.
Delvarian edit delete reply
Delvarian
I love that we are finally getting a bit more history.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Delvarian!

Yeah, this background info coming out now is necessary for the things that are about to happen to Piper and the gang.
zaika edit delete reply
zaika
Oh my god...I've missed so much! Time to get caught up. This looks so cool!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Zaika!!

Thank you very much. I hope that it's not too much at once.
IllustratorMan edit delete reply
IllustratorMan
"BTW, who's this?"

Oookay I take it that this realm has no Official Secrets Act. lol
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Ha ha! either that or Lili is a bit of a screw up.
Twistedfro edit delete reply
Twistedfro
Ha! loved how it ended. Who is this indeed? Great page. It is a lot for Piper but she's taking it well so far
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Twisty! (that's my new nick-name for you)

Thank you. Yep. Piper's no slouch. She's got this.
Domship edit delete reply
Domship
Great way to end the chapter!! Also my head exploded.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Dom!
Thanks. Ha ha, Yeah, it's hard to sip from the fire-hose of knowledge.
Memoria Caelestie edit delete reply
Memoria Caelestie
I would be having an existential crisis too!
Memoria Caelestie edit delete reply
Memoria Caelestie
I would be having an existential crisis too!