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Comic 45 - Page 44
8th Nov 2014, 11:00 PM
Page 44
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Author Notes:
Skweeee edit delete
Skweeee
Here is a page.

Please check out the awesome FanArt I got from ComicRobJonathan. He cleverly combined Piper from this comic and Cobber from my 24 hours comic in his piece, and they absolutely look as though they belong together. It's guys like ComicRobJonathan that are the reason why Comic Fury is a great place to share and chat about making comics.

Also, if you are interested, check out my 24 hour comic challenge from 2013; "Clobber".

Also; SNOW!! We just got dumped on.

User comments:
Centcomm edit delete reply
Centcomm
LOVE panel 4 .. seriously :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Centcomm! I like that one too. It's funny how sometimes the panels with the most impact take very little effort.
Seabiscuit edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Ohh! Totally cool surprise being Bebber mentioned! That 5th panel is just absolute perfection. And those purpley shadows in the 4th one. Oh my god. Bebber is the best.
...I want Piper to meet Bebber bahahahah.

Aww, the fanart is super cute!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hey Seabiscuit, thanks! Panel 5 was lots of fun to draw. It was also fun to draw Bebber.

The meeting of Piper and Bebber is inevitable...
Twistedfro edit delete reply
Twistedfro
Bebber! ahh..that's what I'm talking about :-) is it sick that I have a crush? yea...I think so. :-) Great page. Panel 5 is epic!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Liking Bebber is totally fine. I would like to think that he's just misunderstood.
Skyangel edit delete reply
Skyangel
He is one real scary dude for sure!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Yeah. Bebber's character needs to be that one in the story.
Stever edit delete reply
Stever
Outstanding page! I especially like the coloring in panel 4 and panel 5 is epic.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Stever!!!

I'm a little more happy with this page than others I've pushed out lately.
Matt Knab edit delete reply
Matt Knab
Yeah, massacres generally don't make for family friendly conversation. :)
Great art, as usual!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thank you, Matt. Piper may be smart and confident, but she's still just a kid. Sheesh, keep it clean fella's.
zaika edit delete reply
zaika
Damn...this is greeT
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Zaika!!! I'm glad you think so.
zaika edit delete reply
zaika
Actually. I don't think it's greeT. I think it's great!! Lol that was a really bed typo. Lol
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Ask around man. When it comes to typo's, spelling mistakes, and grammatical errors; I am the Comic Fury champ!
ComicRobJonathan edit delete reply
ComicRobJonathan
This is a great page. Intense, nice use of shading, and really cool use of gore. Also, the author's note made me smile today. I'm glad you appreciated my tribute to your work.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
ComicRob, thanks man! Yeah, gore is fun to render I am ashamed to say.

Thankyou again for the fan art. It's posted in the 'Piper's Extra Things' tab at the top of the page.
iggycrypt edit delete reply
iggycrypt
I love that they needed to be reminded that the conversation had veered from appropriate. Although, I'm pretty sure that Piper would already know the basics of what happened. That seems like it would have made the news and been quite the topic of gossip.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Iggy! Yeah, I kinda want to imply that this is common knowledge, more through rumors than media.
chris-tar edit delete reply
chris-tar
It's funny, because in the town where I come from, there are some very well known gangsters, but if you speak about them publicly, some people will say stuff like "you're not supposed to know that." etc
It's weird how they can be right out in the open, and in your face, but you have to act like there just like everyone else.
Hey! Wait-a minute! It's the same thing with the United States government! Lol
Proxy170 edit delete reply
Proxy170
Love the colors you chose in that fourth panel. And the graphic middle panel is so dramatic...has a ton of movement in it.

Something tells me though that Piper is more mature than they think. Maybe they're just trying to protect her though as long as they can.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thank you Proxy! I was happy with the colours for panel four.

Yeah, Piper is pretty savy, but she's still an eleven year old, who should be more concerned with school, friends, and sports etc... At least that is what I'm trying to convey. the best example I can think of that I'm trying to achieve is a character from my favorite Stephen King novel. If you've read "The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon" you would know about the main character. I'm trying to achieve a real-ness about her in spite of the fantastic elements of the story.
demcleod edit delete reply
demcleod
Whoa, that 5th panel is AWESOME! Bebber is one tough dude!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Hi Dwayne! Thank you. I know that I don't put a tonne of action in my story compared to others, but I do love action though. I try to have it contrasted to gentle and pleasant scenes so that it has the impact that I want to achieve. I hope that that approach is working.
machinehead edit delete reply
machinehead
My god! The violence in the 5th panel is epic!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Aw man, I'm glad that you like it, Machinehead.
moizmad edit delete reply
moizmad
Yeah Ed & Donald, and don't forget that the rest of us are in the car as well!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
That's right Mo. How's this exposition supposed to get off of the ground with Gramma putting the stopper on it.
DizzasterJuice edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
Cleaned the place out? It looks like he made a mess to me.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
That's very true. Hence the fire. Fire cleanses everything!!! Sorta.
sephirencomics edit delete reply
sephirencomics
The grandma's got a point, Piper really shouldn't be hearing this. Great page as usual!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
I'm glad you see it my way Sephirencomics.
dougwarner59 edit delete reply
dougwarner59
I love the way you displayed the violence in the big panel; it really shows the shear power of the gang boss.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Ah thanks man!!
Outlaw edit delete reply
Outlaw
Oh... My... God...
That 5th panel is just freakin' epic, man.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thank you Outlaw! That panel is just a hint of what's to come.
woohooligan edit delete reply
woohooligan
Yes, Piper's much too young to hear about the atrocities committed by Justin Bieber! ;P

Really do like the page. All three of those middle panels are nicely done. :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Woohooligan! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment too. It's one of my favorite things to read a new readers comments on Comic Fury.
woohooligan edit delete reply
woohooligan
Welcome! :D
Songgu Kwon edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
Ah yes... the key players' paths begin to converge!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Oh yeah. I am a sucker for the old-school westerns, that would slowly build towards the final showdown at the end of the movie.
Funny thing is, is that I didn't realize I was doing that until just recently.
shinka edit delete reply
shinka
Holy ninja !!!

Nice work.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Shinka. Coming from you, a fellow connoisseur of action, speed and violence, is quite the compliment.
Travis Michael Moore edit delete reply
Travis Michael Moore
Cool characterizations and variety in each panel.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Travis! Also, thank you for having a look at my comic!!
Delvarian edit delete reply
Delvarian
Uh oh, Bebber is back.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Oh yes!! The crossing of paths is coming. When their paths do cross it's going to get ugly.
Fig edit delete reply
Fig
god damn that is some exquisite carnage, man. blood is so hard sometimes, but here... dude. Bebber seems so much more evil here than he does sleeping in his room xD it's so great. can't wait to see the story develop with him involved. i have a feeling it's gonna be fucking great. just like the rest of this comic lol.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Fig. I love the action and violence, but I want to savor it, like an old school western which slowly builds towards the climactic gunfight.
I think you of all people are going to really appreciate where this story is headed, and I can't wait for the reveals.
IllustratorMan edit delete reply
IllustratorMan
Bebber is the definition of badassery. :D
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
What's not to like about a testosterone fueled Juggernaut.
Slim Kittens edit delete reply
Slim Kittens
Panel 5 appears to show multiple murders. Foxtail Creek has no police? No RCMP?
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
There are a couple of mounties. But Bebber has a nack for not leaving evidence or clues. Usually involves burning...
Slim Kittens edit delete reply
Slim Kittens
Let me take this Remembrance Day to thank you for your service to your country, sir.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much. That means so much to me, as I have lost a few friends while I was in Afghanistan.
Sleeper edit delete reply
Sleeper
That guy stays busy.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Yeah, he's quite the dedicated worker.