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Comic 12 - Page 11
21st May 2014, 10:34 PM
Page 11
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Spitfire edit delete reply
Spitfire
Wow really intense storytelling. Well done :D I hope to see more ^^ it seems like a very juicy story!

Also your art is fantastic!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Spitfire!!
IllustratorMan edit delete reply
IllustratorMan
How much did you have to pay Wilford Brimley to model for this comic? :D

Panel 4 is pure MAGIC. I love that angle and coloring!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Yeah. That's about as cliched as you can get for designing a grandpa character. Thanks, eh!
Stever edit delete reply
Stever
Such a nice diligent granddaughter.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Yes. I want you to like Piper. She's a genuinely good person.
Twistedfro edit delete reply
Twistedfro
I love your art style...and the colors...grade A stuff! :)
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thank you!
ATHENA SCULPTURE edit delete reply
ATHENA SCULPTURE
I'm liking this a lot.I can't wait to see if and how these two worlds come together. The first part has nice weirdness to it.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks. I promise that it will intersect as the story unfolds.
Skyangel edit delete reply
Skyangel
I'm not sure where this story is set but it feels like they lead a pretty basic existence without too much modern technology.
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
They live somewhere in the Northern half of Albert Canada, in a town I made up called Foxtail Creek.
Ryan Dika (Guest) edit delete reply
Never heard of it, or anything like it in Northern Alberta, *L* I certainly don’t pass by anything similar on my way to visit the folks.

This is really good work thus far, and I still have 39 pages to your current one, so things will only get better. But your camera angles, compositions, choose of framing and pace are all very well chosen. Onward to more pages!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thanks Ryan!!! That means a lot.
sephirencomics edit delete reply
sephirencomics
Nice view in panel 4!
Skweeee edit delete reply
Skweeee
Thank you. I do enjoy this type of bird's eye view.